The feelings I feel

The feelings I feel

A Poem by MoonChild

My eyes glistening a crystal blue
No one sees the darkness in me except you
My body shakes at your touch
This feeling I feel is too much
No one has herd my cries or seen my
trauma
Walking day to day as if he was watching from the corner

But no one sees that darkness in me except you

Why have you been sent to me, what is your goal?
Is it to reignite the fire in my soul?
Your whole being so perfect and pure
Me on the other hand so bitter and raw

Two spiritual warriors battling through this life
You take way my stress and my strife
The love you send to me I can't muster up
This feeling I feel is too much

Take me by the hand
Look into my eyes and see who I am
I can't offer you what you need
That darkness that grows inside of me
Is the only thing you will ever see

© 2017 MoonChild


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Short simple and dark.always interesting to view someone's writings who is able to see the world "differently".well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I can relate to this so much, you have no idea. I always look for dark writers like myself. There is so much feeling in your words, it comes from deep within and that's how I know you're a great writer.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Sandra Soto

6 Years Ago

Yeah, you are so right. It makes us stronger.

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Added on August 17, 2017
Last Updated on August 19, 2017
Tags: pain, hurt, heartache, love, brokenlove, Truelove

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MoonChild
MoonChild

United Kingdom



About
I started writing poetry in secondary school (high school) - after having one published I stopped, now at age 28 I've started writing again. more..

Writing
I tried I tried

A Poem by MoonChild