The Remembrance, of the Kiss.

First poem I attempted to write, on the words from a friend.

 

The most beautiful part of the Kiss is the moment just before,

When the first sweet wisp of breath enters your mouth,

When the lips feel the sensation even before the touch,

When the eyes start to close, changing the senses from sight to sensuality,

When the hand first touches the neck for caress,

When the trembling reaches the surface of your skin,

When, without uttering a single word, you start to speak to each other.

And the words drift from one mind to the next with a subtleness of knowing what each other is like, what each other feels.

In their Body. In their Heart. And, In their Soul. 
 
 

Reviews

[Molly Katherine]

very erotic in a subtle way... picturesque love scene from some hollwood romance. a nice write, but a liottle too flowery for my taste. For a first poem, very impressive. the thing about poetry tho, is its all been said before. u have to find a way to make a kiss unique through words.... a million poets have dissected kisses and passion and sex, its a trite topic, but there are ways to make it individual. greta start tho, dont give up.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a wonderful piece and The flow could use a little evening out but when it comes to content
This is exceptional. Great job.
Debby

[Vincent Maltese]

I like the way you put almost a devine break down on the kiss. i love you how make the reader imagine the words pass from one mouth to the next during the sensual kiss. Very nicely done

[Suzanne C. Suber]

Ah, yes, the stir of anticipation! The essence of fulfillment. Well done! Suzanne

[Got Lost In Lagos!]

So beautiful......i found myself completely lost in the experience as i read this poem! I really enjoyed this one. well done!

[Blogiudi]

Wow. Wow. Wow. I really enjoyed this one! This is one of those poems that you not only can visualize easily, but you FEEL it as well. Maybe it's more a wanting to feel it...
Well written.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

Well you are right this is much more my style. I think this is an absolutely beautiful piece You
show so much more of a softer side in this, something you tend to hide from the world most of the time. I think you have been hurt deeply and this piece lets us see the beauty of your soul.
Debby

[Esra]

wow. this is beautiful! i would never be able to put the sensuality of a kiss into words like you did, i especially love 'When the eyes start to close, changing the senses from sight to sensuality,' thats wonderful and very poetic, loved it!