Airtight?

A Verse In 12 Lines

Love,

at first sight,

is shallow,

me fears.

With their eyes,

do men fall,

with women,

their ears.

Am I right,

am I wrong?

Is my poesy 

airtight?

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Author's Note

Whaddaya think ???

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

I'm inclined to say yes;
women do fall time and
time again for the same
old song and dance routine
men are darn good coming
up with those BS lines feeding
our ears ...yea they are..

[Dylan Macadham]

Hi Fran Marie :)
I think us guys are darn good at BS lines because we're afraid you won't like us for who we really are. ...sad, but true :(

[Chris Shaw]

Whaddaya I think?. I think you might be right pal. Men fall with their eyes and women their ears. However, once bitten twice shy and I don't listen any more because I still have the teeth marks. to remind me. Your poesy is airtight.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Hi Chris, it's always a treat to hear from you :))
Just a thought,
and this from a pal,
but seeing's how you mentioned it,
"once bitten, twice shy,"
maybe this is you hinting to you,
that maybe it's time,
for another try :)

[Chris Shaw]

I hear no hints and I see no possibilities :))

[Dylan Macadham]

... Isn't that what Catherine said just before she met Heathcliff ? ... Oops, poor example :D haha