Cross Words!

Cross Words!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Snippet, in 3 lines

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Perhaps Christ's lament,
"Why hast Thou forsaken me?!"
means God doesn't exist.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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Dylan Macadham
An alternate take. ...Your thoughts?

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God never forsake us... probably it's us who forsake god when things get odd and out of hand.... He will always be with us no matter what. If needed he teaches us in most possible ways rather than forsaking us. I hope you get what I'm conveying 😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, Fairy :)
Fairy

3 Months Ago

Ur most welcome 🤗



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God never forsake us... probably it's us who forsake god when things get odd and out of hand.... He will always be with us no matter what. If needed he teaches us in most possible ways rather than forsaking us. I hope you get what I'm conveying 😊

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, Fairy :)
Fairy

3 Months Ago

Ur most welcome 🤗

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Added on January 12, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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