Swept Away!

a Snippet, in 3 lines

Broom in hand, she thinks,

Life is a Witch, then you fly!

... Trying, she did die.

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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i enjoyed this piece, it gave me a little chuckle. i understand her feelings - life is indeed a witch and wanting to fly away, then learning tha escape is never easy. there is no moral in this story, yet there is truth in it. we have freedom of choice, but every choice happens to suck, c'est la vie.

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, thanks EM! :)

[Neville]

.. succinct is one of my favourite words & I got a thing about brooms .. I also know a few witches .. so for me, despite it's brevity .. this has just about everything .. Neville

[Dylan Macadham]

Gracias Neville!
Yes, they take our hearts as Angels, and drive in the stakes as Witches! ... Am I mixing my Metawitches?🤣

[Neville]

.......... maybe 🐧👍

[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work in its brevity.