...on Second Thought!

...on Second Thought!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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"Hell is other folks!"
French philosopher, Sartre
said, in a tantrum.
.  .  .
"Life would be simpler
If you'd just do as I say,
and do as I do!
.  .  .
... but on second thought,
if all of you thought my way,
 I'd have zip to say!"
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

John Paul Sartre wrote, "Hell is other people," 
...and the rest I just kinda made up :) 

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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And a good making up too! Wonderfully expressed 🙏🏻🕊

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks Red Brick, music to my ears!😃
redd Brick Keshner

2 Months Ago

You’re welcome 🙏🏻🕊
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MCS
I often quote John Paul Sartre he was so right.
Another good one my friend!

Posted 2 Months Ago


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MCS

2 Months Ago

he sure does there is a whole school of such wise people with pearls of wisdom to help us get throug.. read more
Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Yes, I've actually read & reread Ernest Becker's 'The Denial of Death', an excellent summary of the .. read more
MCS

2 Months Ago

its a great read :)
Lol. Great stuff. Tremendous.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Music to my ears, thanks Thomas :

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Added on February 27, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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