...Outside Ourselves!

...Outside Ourselves!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Ideas exist,
and have always existed,
outside of ourselves.
.  .  .
We can say they're ours
if no one's said them before,
but they're really not ...
.  .  .
'cause they're in the Soup,
and all we can do is stir,
and serve 'em on up. 
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

...maybe Writer's Block ain't a block,
just an unstirred bowl :)

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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interesting take on the ideas and writing. this is a bit out-of-box, ideas always exist, they are in the soup and we need to stir and let it bubble up. ideas on the way... keep going, nicely penned, Dylan.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Always appreciate your thought, AH, Thanks :)
A.H.

2 Months Ago

you're very welcome, Dylan.
Ah, insightful wisdom! Even my typing predictor got that. The Soup we ladle from and the Soup we wade in, swim in and deep dive into. Just marvellously depicted. 🙏🏻🕊 this goes to where my musings oft wander 🕊🙏🏻

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Red Brick! ...and for your always welcome & so often humorous thoughts :)
redd Brick Keshner

2 Months Ago

Only to glad that there is humour to be had. A few do not consider these quips as humorous at all….. read more
Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

...Ditto😅
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MCS
I believe you’re right that nothing is original anymore. I guess the next option is to find stuff worth imitating. Nicely done :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

An insightful answer, thanks Mary :) In my mind-picture, you're standing between your easel and your.. read more
MCS

2 Months Ago

LOL sometimes that's what is going on.
Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

........😅

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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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