T.B.D

T.B.D

A Poem by Dave
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Haven't written anything in a while. So this is what I wrote. forgot how fun this website was. Glad it's still here.

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When the confidence stops the fear begins
Dust in the shadow
Trees in the sun

Pump that heart until it's broke
The winds still blow
a life
a death
a joke

All that was given was given in truth
The joy
The blues
...the YOU

Kick it into gear and wake the stubborn passion
No need to bury something that keeps you un-numb

All moments are fleeting
Even the walls
All patience is breathing
No soul stalls

Caressed in contentment 
that soothes without touch
Let live the moment
that gives with no crutch

© 2023 Dave


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A wonderful comeback poem.

"Let live the moment
that gives with no crutch"

I really liked the message and presentation of the poem. I hope you keep posting.



Posted 1 Year Ago


That was pretty cool. Welcome back if that is the appropriate thing to say.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on March 22, 2023
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