I Feel Alive

Feel do i? can i feel?

I Feel Alive

 

I feel, at least I thank I feel.

I feel as if I am but a shell, a shell, a figure, an empty.

I feel as though my artist forgot the heart, the soul, the muse of creation.

I feel as perhaps thy artist wanted to forget, me, the shell, thy figure, thus the emptiness.

I feel maybe, yes maybe, is this a feeling or is it just emptiness acting to be something of nothing.

I feel, I thank hate for thy artist, for forgetting, for thy the shell, for thy hollowness feeling of nothing inside and endless nothingness…

 

 

           

           

           

 

                                                                                                Signed,

                                                                                                             Your creation of shell. 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[Heather]

wow this is deep stuff and really leaves you thinking i absolutely love it! such a simple base but each word has endless meanings and allows the poem to naturally and beautifully flow, great job! and welcome to writerscafe! :D