A Gift

The cat licks it lips
The bird lay stiff, unmoving
The blood still flowing

Reviews

[Aarea]

Um, not sure exactly what Jqckson's problem is, looks like he is being a bit abusive of your writing. However, I think that you have quite a talent for poetry. I have read three of your poems so far and they are very good. You have just enough vague to let the reader's imagination run wild, and just enough detail to steer us in the right direction. Good job, and don't let anyone ever tell you to stop writing. :)

[Jqckson]

You're writing sucks a*s. Just give up.

[Rhia Barton]

.............. *Your