Empty

Standing in an empty room.
I breakdown and cry.
I don't know what to do anymore.
I just don't want to hurt inside.
leave me alone, my heart is broken,
here are the pieces. Keep them as a token.

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Honesty is good, the poem was okay, I would have liked to see more (imagery) than be told more. Keep writing, practice makes perfect. Good write overall. Keep it up! :)

[fallen angel]

honest and to the point...well put