her inner thoughts

her inner thoughts

A Poem by Daisy Santiago

The pain she has to go through is like no other,
She hides in her bedroom with the company of her sorrows.
She hopes & she prays to God,
"When will all of this end?"
He answers, "My child, trust in me. I am no enemy, yet a friend."
She longs for a change of love & respect
Yet, all she gets is hatred & neglect.
Her faith is slowly growing weary,
Thinking to herself, 'is this truly necessary?'
She's thinking it's almost hitting her limit of endurance,
Yet God reassures her,
"Patience my child, time is yet to come for a difference."

© 2015 Daisy Santiago


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I like the deep thoughts leading to the positive ending.
"Patience my child, time is yet to come for a difference."
Take years to learn. If you don't like the path you are on. Find another one. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisy Santiago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, and wonderful comments!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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I like the deep thoughts leading to the positive ending.
"Patience my child, time is yet to come for a difference."
Take years to learn. If you don't like the path you are on. Find another one. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisy Santiago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, and wonderful comments!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Daisy Santiago
Daisy Santiago

Colorado Springs , CO



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Im only 19 years young (: I'm a beginner when it comes to writing poetry, but when I write I feel as if I can express myself thoroughly. I'm super friendly! Feel free to follow me on my other socia.. more..