One in a million

Your my sunshine on the beach
My ocean deep
Your the stars I'm the moon
I float like a hot air balloon
Your sweet as a tea leaf
Me and you meant to be
Your my end of the rainbow
You make me grow
I am so in love with you

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Dalebear,

Ah love....I am not a fan of love, it seems to only end in heartbreak. I would rather....well....Another good piece my friend, You do have the wrong your where it should be you're. One in a million, bah, the more the better....but don't tell mamabear I said that.

Regards,

Matthew

[emmah]

ah soulful yet again! she must be really special to have a poet and a person as special as you write such beautiful words for her!!!

[...]

. oh, how lovely ... my soul mate used to write poems for me too ... they are the most beautiful presents i ever got from anyone ... :) ...

[ThisLullaby]

Hmm, good ideas, nice writing
but i have corrections for you

"You're" not your
and "Me and you" should be, "you and I"

good write!