My Life

My life is very dark 

It happened right from the start 

The feeling of alone 

I don't really have a home 

Feeling lost in time and space 

My heart beats like it's a race 

How do you stop a feeling like this?

Dear god can I have one wish

Reviews

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. by knowing that that home is in your heart ... and that home will never depart ... for in it friends will stay ... and keep you warm on a rainy day ... :) ... loved your poem ... you write beautifully ... i don't really have a home either ... except in my heart ... :) ...

[Jeff]

Very well written with lots of emotion.

[Brown Bull]

God, who is a pretty smart Guy, knows that if He was to grant us even one wish... we, who think we are just as smart as God, would all just wish for unlimited wishes. But if we just take a moment to tell God about something that is important to us the form of a prayer... He will always grant it!

[Wondering Mind]

This is a heartfelt write. One can sense the sincerity in each line.

[emmah]

oh how wonderfully you write, dalebear! how pure is that soul that makes these honest words pour!!!
when we go through the darkness of pain - we emerge stronger and more brave than before - and yes, our homes are in our hearts - we might take some time coming home, and it isn't easy - we make it with the understanding of those who know - but the pure souls like yours - always find their way home!
its an honor to read your words, dear one!