Angel Child

She has her own secret wings

The sadness and pain that she sings

No one see’s behind those close doors

She had to hide the bruises she wore

 

This sad little girl who has been beaten

She walks around weak which she hasn’t eaten

Her soul is shattered and tattered

From which she was so bruised and battered

 

Her eyes streamed with painful tears

She was an angel trying to fight her fears

Until one day she flew away

Which she had no more demons to slay

 

This little girl has been set free

The monsters and demons are finally let be

This brittle angel with the brittle broken heart

In she goes to heaven with a new clean start

 

She floats and flies

Through the never-ending skies

Of her wings of blue

As she got to heavens gates she finally smiles too

 

 

Reviews

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. oh my oh my ... i don't know the song but this is a song in and of itself ... it's so amazingly lovingly and beautifully written ... i can't believe my eyes ... and i completely agree with paul and mamabear ... you're just absolutely out of this world brilliant ... a genius poet with a heart of gold ... i'm so proud that you are my friend ... smiling away i am ... :) ...

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Totally angelic, touching. Perfect rhyming, with excellent choie of words. You created a picture with your words, I love it
Keep writing

[paul]

secret wings... beautiful
wow. heartbreakingly beautiful
i'm continually amazed by your talent

[mamabear]

OMG! Dale you are brilliant! You made me cry baby. I know the song and this is sooooooooooooooooooooo much better. Words can't describe how this poem makes me feel. The unbearable pain that this angel child feel is really felt in your poem. Well done! Congratluations!