World

 

My life is falling

Or is it god calling

Why is the world so dark?

Every bad thing that happens leaves a mark

The world is broken

Yet the politicians are always out spoken

The world gives us pain

Takes all the happiness and drain

Is this why some f the world is insane?

 

 

 

Reviews

[mamabear]

My Darling Dalebear, The world is broken indeed sweetheart but there is still some good things in the world too. Together we can fix it for you, together as a family. We will help you find the light and leave the darkness behind. Together there is nothing we can't do baby.

Dalebear we all love you and we need you in our lives. My life would never be the same without you. The world would be a dark and horrible place without you!!!!!
Very sad poem beautifully written by my favourite poet and favourite son, my dalebear.

All my love always,

Mamabear xxxxxxx

[Cafe Reader]

Very well expressed!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

wow, very well spoken. yea it is becoming a dark world, and i think its only going to get darker, deeper in a black hole. thanks for sharing. good punct.

[em]

- yes - its a dark world - and all it needs - is for someone to shine - bright enough to drive this darkness out - and then turn it into a colorful, wonderful place - i agree with serah - and with anne - there's nothing like love - to make this change - and i know - that if someone can spin darkness on its head - its you - you're armed with great talent, great love and great resilience - and i know - you will rock this world!! :) - serah always has the right words!! :D -

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. brilliantly written and expressed, dale ... but i agree with anne ... she said it perfectly ... her love for you and your love for her definitely makes the world a better place already ... and when you grow up ... with your talents in everything ... i am certain that you would contribute even more to making this world an even more beautiful place ... if it's too broken, it just means we have to work harder ... but you're a hard working bear ... and nothing is too tough for you ... and with anne ... it's going to be even easier ... you all will truly rock this world ! ... :) ...