Burning (Song)

Sick of the feeling

I'm never gon' win this

I'm reaching the ceiling 

Emotions are giving

The wound is not healing

How can I forget this

The Dark is appealing

Though Light I have witnessed

Demons are screaming out louder than ever

F**k, Damien keep reaching, those ties you will sever 

Love is decieveing, though lies very clever

No point in keeping, those skies aren't forever

Trying to climb down to the ashes 

To climb up, continue to patch this

Those bridges never lasted, no chance 

Fire on a rage influenced canvas

Now I'm up standing

Think I can handle it?

Think I can manage to convert the madness

Lose it all gambling, then like my dad quit

Meet up with crack heads, then take mad hit

I won't get what want

Soon won't get what I need

But I'll need for there 

To be someone for me

I know it isn't fair, expected to see

But please believe, I'll give all that I keep

I'll need her to have a tattoo on her face

So we can walk through our life at the same pace

Obsession, possession, love unerased

Attention, affection, doubt ever unfaced

It's actually not that too much to ask for

When did you stop to care when I asked you

My heart was hot, your's like a cat, cool

Won't get involved, don't get attached to

My effort in love is over 

No longer feeling my heart's exposure

Quit searching

I have been learning

If I keep yearning

Them bridges burn.

This castle is burning

Trapped, no turning

Thought's concerning

And smoke rises

As the snow falls

Rushing the rain

The tides are coming in faster

Then I could have ever predicted

The waves are like walls 

Will I hold my ground or slip

From the water wall to the rocks on the shore

My head caved in for my need to explore

Trying to quench my thirst for knowledge

Always end up falling finding more

I'm starting to realize that what I keep searching for

I will not find cause it doesn't exist

I know that I can't stop time

I know that there's no f*****g point to this

I've watched so many youth walking through life alone

They are not happy, they have no home

They are there camping, no one to hold

No man, it can't be, oh but I know... 

I was one of those kids 

4 of my friends, we were living in tents

Partying harder then we should have been

We loved the freedom, but never again

Had a crew full of hate

Waking up late to another escape

We were working so hard just to live

Survival now a tattoo on my face

6 years has passed

I wonder just how those friends have managed

I hope they made it and changed it and stayed with elevation

Cause that's just crazy 

There should be no reason in Canada

Kids shouldn't be so damaged

One look and it looks like their mad at you

Musicians keep taking advantage

Reviews

[Natasha]

this was a great song lyric- I myself can not imagine how hard a song is to write, much harder i think than a poem--good and powerful work

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much, I have audio for it, but it is rather bad quality.

[Graveyard Queen]

amazing... loved it!

[Damien Davison]

Thank you!

[Tarry Franck]

Very powerful - enjoyed it very much

[Damien Davison]

Thanks alot!

[Heather]

This is such a strong piece. Full of emotion, imagery, etc. Your songs are very catchy :)
good job!!

[Damien Davison]

Why thank you, been trying to focus hard on the music lately, I can only improve I suppose!

[Heather]

Well so far and even before, Your words are powerful beyond explanation! :)

[Dominique]

Hmm. I would say this is a good peice and I like the rythm, the lyrics are a bit off at times but it is still wonderful. Great song. If it came out right now, I would buy it.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much, It'll be avalable for download within a month. The lyrics are only off cause this is the fastest rap I've done, and in some spots the way I do it sounds a lot better with music lol. I'll be sure to let you know when I have it recorded!

[Dominique]

ooh I can't wait to hear it then :)

[Dominique]

You have a good voice and I can hear every word well so it is good, and I see how you say it is the fasstest rap you have done. I will have to buy this soon. I like the way the lyrics came out in a different way when you rapped it too, so thanks for putting up the music with it. I loved it.

[Damien Davison]

Thanks for appreciating it! I'm going to be putting up a better version with a free download so I'mm let you know, should be tomorrow!

[Dominique]

Awsome! Then I will check tomorrow!