Far Sun (Poem)

This is a father's greatest fear. I hope this never happens to you baby girl...

The Dark one

Far sun

Distant and too cold to breathe

An ice touch

Slowed blood

Staring up in disbelief

Escaping 

'Save me!'

Innocence is torn away

With dark greed

Heart bleeds

A stain tinting light of day

Reviews

[Lonely Islander]

well, only a father can really truly feel the way you feel...i can try my best to understand but i can only understand maybe about 0.1% of it....you know most girls are also nagging and complaining about how their fathers are over-protective and don't let them go to parties and have boyfriends..they should read this...even they wouldn't understand how their fathers feel but they will atleast get a reason...another great piece:):):D.

[Damien Davison]

Wow, thank you, I never even thought of it as a helpful viewpoint! I appreciate the review, thank you again!

[Sierra Erway]

i don't think i get exactly what you're trying to explain, but i did feel a sense of like 'oh god, no!' when i read this. very nice!

[Damien Davison]

It's about someone in the future potentially raping my daughter... It's a fathers worst fear, next to death... Thanks for reading!