Click Feed (Poem)

I was kinda being silly in the second stanza...

Imagine the day

We can email our clothes

Email some food to them

Warm up the cold

Click feed the world

And send sandwich prints

Salami and ham on them

Mayo on chins

Reviews

[Akira Kodama]

Heh, the way I see this is as a look at a near future where technology is even more dominant than it is now. I laughed a bit while reading this. Good write.

[Damien Davison]

Why thank you, I appreciate the review! Look up The Singularity

[will_h]

I liked it! the second stanza doesn't strike me as silly at all...

[Damien Davison]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reviewing!

[kimmy]

This does make one think, I was the same when I was younger about throwing food away. My mom would say do you know what a child would do for half of what is on your plate? I would of course say no, you should just give it to them.
You are right we can send just about anything threw mail or email and it does its purpose, but what about the people that are hungry? This is sad to say but people see them and say oh they are bums looking for the next high or drink. I have seen many people be ignored.
Sorry, poem made me start thinking about even more:)

[Damien Davison]

That's perfectly fine! It was supposed to provoke thought. I thank you for reviewing!

[Claire Twinn]

Yeah, my parents always tried to get me to think about the starving kids in Africa when I refused to eat my greens and I always offered to post it to them!

[Damien Davison]

Haha, well emailing may come out a little fresher lol! Thanks for revieiwing.

[Dinesh Sairam]

It was building up towards something, until the second stanza ended abruptly. Maybe it just needs a touch of old-school philosophy. Keep writing.

[Damien Davison]

I meant for it to end there, just a short 2 stanza poem to make you think. Thanks for reviewing though!

[}Echo{]

Wow.. Nice..

[Damien Davison]

Heh, thank you!

[}Echo{]

:))

[Baby Ricochet]

I'd do that

[Damien Davison]

Indeed!

[jkhatz]

Could you click me a beer? I'd like that...

[Damien Davison]

lol, beeeeer....