Cool Dark Poem

Cool Dark Poem

A Poem by Daniel Contreras IV
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I was bored and felt like being random

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When I'm by myself
I feel the shadows depth
It is cool and comforting
Crap, what rhymes with depth
wepth, vepth, gepth, nothing, darn
I'm trying to write a cool dark poem, and I can't get past the third line
Now my friend interrupted me and ruined my train of thought
He's trying to think of something to rhyme with thought right now while I'm typing this
He didn't know what bliss meant
Crap, what was I writing about
I don't even know, but my friend called me a d********g
But he's a d********g because he forgot that we aren't saying d****e anymore
Instead, we are calling people maxi pads
Now he just offered me an opportunity to make crystal meth with him and the chemistry teacher
I told him I didn't like her, but would if it was the history teacher
Okay, enough dilly dallying, I need to write a dark poem to get my cred up for all the people that reside on this site.
Here I go:

Death
Razor Blades
Being alone
The color (really neutral) black

Yeah, I should be soooooooooooooooooo cool on here now

© 2010 Daniel Contreras IV


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interesting. If you like dark poetry, most of my poems are dark. You like to go your own way with poetry, putting actual thoughts into poetic form.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice =) do you have a facebook?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol nice one amusing to read, I like how you just put your trail of thought in a poetic structure.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2010
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Daniel Contreras IV
Daniel Contreras IV

Sandusky, OH



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18 year old high schooler from Sandusky, Ohio. Loves long walks on the beach, but hates sand. That stuff gets everywhere. In all your crevices and such. I love to write. Mostly screenplays. I'll add t.. more..

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