Granddauter's Light

A Poem by Dan

Granddaughter, my light

She fills my heart to the brim

Grandfather's heart soars

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Now this is a perfect Haiku. Couldn't have done better myself. Great Haiku!

Good haiku, but remember haikus do not rhyme.

I know the feeling. I only see my one grandchild, a girl, about once a year. I hope you see yours everyday.

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Added on April 22, 2010
Last Updated on April 22, 2010

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