The end

The end

A Poem by Daniel Dawes
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Finding self.

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Falling into the ocean,
I emerge from the darkness,
A choice to be made,
Life or illusion?

Immersed in the flow,
Body limp, No fighting now,
Beginning to see,
Total surrender.

Seeing without sight,
Hearing under sound,
Heart beating,
Spirit breathing.

Contraction stops,
The door's always open,
Stepping through nothing,
Freedom from all.

© 2014 Daniel Dawes


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A superb poem with a masterful sense of mystery in death. Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very well-written. The short sentences make every word so powerful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Dawes

10 Years Ago

Thank you and glad you connected to it....

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Added on February 14, 2014
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Tags: Illusion, Life, Surrender, Freedom

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Daniel Dawes
Daniel Dawes

Totnes, Devon, United Kingdom



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I live and work in England, Devon in the beautiful town of Saltash. Started writing poetry about 8 years ago to get on paper what was floating in the void. I like writing simple poetry that people can.. more..

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