Paperclip guy

A Poem by Danijel

Paperclip guy on the bottom of my word file.

I can't help but realize you are giving me the eye.

Hair and a body you miss, but I don't care, you help me with my Ingelish.

Not word nor a whisper you create, our relationship a secret you make.

Eight hours a day you accompany me,

through the worst of times you entertain me.

My work you... improve with the light bulb on your head,

that tells me you have a better idea instead.

From word files to spread sheets you know no bounds,

a better friend I could not have found.

However I worry that we can never be,

for our children would be a catastrophe.

Hunted by Microsoft for their ingenuity and cast out by society for their good looks, which they got from me.

© 2012 Danijel

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Loner

Extremely creative and captivating write i must say
thanks for sharing !

Posted 12 Years Ago

Viki Rachel

I disagree with it being "beautiful", but humor it does not lack. He always really annoys me, so I got rid of him. I like to write in peace, but it's nice that you see him in a more enlightening way.
If you're going to write with such good rhyme, then you should be able to add the "Y" and "O" to "you". After "however" in the first line of the last stanza, you should put a comma there.
"However, I worry that we can never be; For our hildren would be a catastrophe." That sounds more complete and correct.
I hope you're joking when you're writing "you" incorrectly (because obviously you're joking when mispelling ENGLISH), but you may just be a little lazy because I see in the Author's Note box that you didn't capitalize "I" the first time around. Typo or not, I reccomend you re-read your poems. Besides the minor grammar issues, it is an amusing little write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Dewella~Vintella

Humorous and beautiful. I found myself smiling through the entire piece, and it was wonderfully written as well. I think you did a great job at being constructive. ^^

Dewella~