![]() The Three WsA Story by Darius Chinoy![]() This was my first short story written in 1997 and I managed to find it![]() 'Good
morning, Sir,' came the crisp voice of Detective Constable Annabelle Dawson as
she stepped into the cluttered office. Detective Inspector Daniel Kard looked
up from his half-drunk cup of Earl Grey, the steam curling in the cold morning
air. 'Miss
Dawson? What on earth brings you here on a Sunday morning?' She
closed the door quietly behind her, her expression grave. 'Bad news, sir. It's
about Sir Albert Crowther. He's been found dead... in his study at Crowther
Hall.' DI
Kard's face drained of color. The teacup clattered against its saucer. 'What?
That's not possible I only saw him two days ago. He looked perfectly well.' 'I
haven't all the details yet, sir. The local station tried calling you several
times, but when there was no answer, they rang me instead.' DI
Kard groaned, running a hand through his disheveled hair. 'I must've slept
through it. Bloody hell.' The
drive to Crowther Hall was solemn. DC Dawson sat quietly at the wheel, sensing
her superior's deep disquiet. A light rain began to fall, droplets racing
across the windshield like tears. She knew the history DI Kard and Sir Albert
had known each other since boyhood, alumni of Oxford, both brilliant students
of law. But while DI Kard pursued justice in uniform, Sir Albert had inherited
both title and estate, becoming the Duke of Somerset after his father's
untimely demise. 'He
wasn't just my friend,' DI Kard said suddenly, breaking the silence. 'He was
like a brother.' DC
Dawson nodded, unsure what comfort she could offer. Crowther
Hall emerged like a phantom from the morning mist, its stone towers and
ivy-strewn walls surrounded by a still, dark moat. Even in death, it projected
the same aristocratic austerity as its master. The drawbridge creaked slightly
as they crossed it, as if the ancient home itself were groaning in mourning. Inside
the study, time had stopped. Sir
Albert sat slumped in his high-backed leather armchair, head drooping toward
his chest, a half-smoked cigarette wedged between his rigid fingers. His study
was as grand as the man himself lined with ancient books, artifacts from his
travels across six continents, and the faint aroma of sandalwood and ash. Detective
Chief Inspector David Brown, a stout man with bristly sideburns and tired eyes,
greeted them. 'DI Kard, I'm sorry old chap. I truly am. I know what he meant to
you.' DI
Kard nodded, his gaze fixed on the lifeless body of his oldest friend. 'Any
idea what happened?' DCI
Brown shook his head. 'Too early to say with certainty. Medical examiner says
he's been dead roughly ten hours. The PM should tell us more.' DI
Kard moved closer, examining the desk. Two cigarette boxes Wills and Benson
& Hedges lay nearby. The former nearly full. The latter, empty. He noticed
a well-worn book 'Macbeth' and under it, Sir Albert's leather-bound diary. 'One
appointment yesterday,' DI Kard muttered, flipping the diary open. 'Sir Larry
Crowther. The stepbrother.' He
turned to DC Dawson. 'Get the body to the morgue. Send the cigarette butts and
the one in his hand to the lab. I want a full toxicology screen.' DCI
Brown added, 'Larry moved out last week. Now lives with Lady Edwina Hatch in
Salisbury. We've informed him. He's on his way.' DI
Kard stared out the window, watching the rain intensify. 'You suspect foul
play?' 'I'd
be lying if I said no.' 'And
I'd be disappointed if you did,' DI Kard replied, his voice hollow. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The
post-mortem arrived later that evening. The three detectives gathered in DCI
Brown's makeshift office in the east wing of Crowther Hall. Brown cleared his
throat and read the preliminary findings aloud. 'The
cause of death - cyanide poisoning.' DI
Kard sighed heavily. 'I knew it. But look at the neurologist's notes he had glioblastoma
too and it was terminal. Wouldn't have lived more than a week, even without the
poison.' DC
Dawson murmured, 'Why would someone kill a dying man?' DI
Kard's voice hardened. 'Because someone didn't know. Or someone didn't care.' The
next morning, the trio assembled again in DCI Brown's office. The rain had
stopped, but a thick fog clung to the grounds of Crowther Hall like a shroud. 'No
guards, no servants?' asked DC Dawson, reviewing her notes. 'He
dismissed them all for a week,' DCI Brown replied. 'Most unusual for him.' 'Very
odd indeed,' she said, frowning. 'Two
suspects then,' DI Kard said decisively. 'Sir Larry Crowther and the
chauffeur Leon Bridgewater. The were only the two present that night.' Bridgewater
arrived first for questioning. A lanky, nervous man with grey at his temples
and hands that couldn't stay still. 'Tell
us about Saturday,' DCI Brown asked, pen poised. 'Sir
Albert asked me to stay while the others had a week off. At 10 a.m., I reported
in as usual. Around 11, he had me drive him to St. Bartholomew's Church. Stayed
in the confession box a long while. Came out... looking shaken. Sad. Almost
like he'd been crying.' 'Where
to after church?' asked DI Kard, watching the man intently. 'We
drove around. Across the moor. To the coast. Even to Poole, sir.' 'Poole?
To my place?' 'Yes,
sir. We didn't go in. He just stared at your house for nearly an hour. Said
nothing the entire time.' DI
Kard and DC Dawson exchanged glances. 'We
returned around seven thirty. He offered me a hundred quid to stay late. I
agreed. Around ten, Sir Larry arrived in a cab. I told him Sir Albert had
requested not to be disturbed, but he said it was family business and went in
anyway. Fifteen minutes later, he came out looking angry and left without a
word. I stayed till eleven, then retired to my quarters.' 'Did
you see anyone else that night?' 'No,
sir. Just Sir Larry.' 'What
brand did Sir Albert smoke?' 'Only
Benson & Hedges, sir. Never touched anything else. Said all other brands
were beneath contempt.' Then
came the forensics report, delivered by a young constable who looked like he
hadn't slept in days. 'The
cigarette he smoked last?' DC Dawson asked, skimming through the pages. 'Wills
brand,' the DCI said, tapping the report. 'With cyanide in the filter.' DI
Kard frowned, pacing the room. 'Why would he smoke Wills when he loathed them?' 'Let's
hear from Sir Larry,' DCI Brown suggested. The
younger Crowther was tall, well-dressed, and clearly shaken. His face bore the
unmistakable marks of grief, but also something deeper fear. 'You're
our primary suspect, Larry,' DI Kard began without preamble. 'You'll need to
speak plainly.' 'Fine,'
Sir Larry exhaled, his voice tight with restraint. 'Albert had become...
impossible these past months. Ever since I announced my engagement to Edwina,
he'd been on edge. Said I wasn't fit to inherit the family estate. Threatened
to cut me off completely. Then, out of nowhere, he summoned me back to Crowther
Hall on Saturday night. I got there around ten. He
said he was out of cigarettes and asked for one of mine Wills, not his usual. I
handed one over without thinking. That's when he told me... he was dying, he
had a brain tumor and it was terminal. Said he had a week, maybe less. Then he
begged me not to marry Edwina. Said he couldn't explain why, just that I
mustn't go through with it. I told him I would, no matter what. That set him
off. He lost his temper, shouted at me to get out and never come back. So I
left.' 'What
time did you leave?' 'Ten
thirty. Got back to Salisbury by midnight. Edwina can confirm that.' 'Alright,'
said DI Kard. 'Wait outside.' DCI
Brown leaned back in his chair as soon as the door closed. 'That's it then.
Open-and-shut. He gave Albert the poisoned Wills.' DI
Kard shook his head slowly. 'Too neat. Why poison a Wills when he could lace
Albert's usual brand?' 'Maybe
because the B&H pack was empty,' DC Dawson suggested. 'Or
maybe... it wasn't.' Later
that evening, haunted by doubts, DI Kard returned to Crowther Hall. The cold
stone walls echoed his footsteps as he made his way through the grand hallway.
He entered the study and sat in Sir Albert's chair, feeling the ghost of his
friend's presence all around him. He
stared into the dying embers of the fire. Then his eyes fell on the wastebasket
beside the desk. A half-burnt note inside bore the words: WINE - crossed out. WEALTH - crossed out.
WOMEN - crossed out.
The
Three Ws. A
shiver ran through him as realization dawned. He grabbed the phone on the desk
and dialed quickly. 'Get
me the lab. Yes, now. It's urgent.' A
moment later 'Check the tobacco used in the Wills cigarette. Was it
really Wills? Or B&H?' Half
an hour later, the call came back. 'Tobacco
inside was Benson & Hedges. Not Wills.' DI
Kard closed his eyes, pieces falling into place. 'He framed his brother.' He
picked up the phone again. 'DCI
Brown, release Sir Larry. Albert's death wasn't murder it was suicide,
brilliantly staged to look like murder.' 'Are
you certain?' came the incredulous response. 'Beyond
doubt. He emptied his B&H, filled a Wills shell with his tobacco, and laced
it with cyanide. He knew Larry would bring Wills cigarettes. He asked for one,
but smoked his own poisoned creation instead.' 'But
why?' 'Vengeance,'
DI Kard said grimly. 'His last act of spite.' The
next morning, DI Kard met with Sir Larry and explained everything. The young
man's face crumpled in anguish. 'Why
would he hate me so much?' 'It
wasn't just hate,' DI Kard said softly. 'It was the Three Ws. Wine, wealth,
women. The things Albert valued most. Things he believed you were taking from
him.' 'I
don't understand.' 'He
didn't want you to inherit his wealth. And Edwina...' DI Kard hesitated.
'Albert loved her once, didn't he?' Sir
Larry's eyes widened. 'Years ago, before she met me. But she rejected him.' 'The
one woman he couldn't have. And you, his younger brother, won her heart
instead.' Silent
tears streamed down Sir Larry's face. 'He would have destroyed my life. Made me
a murderer in everyone's eyes.' 'Yes,'
DI Kard said. 'His final revenge. But he didn't count on old friends who knew
him too well.' Three
days later, DC Dawson met DI Kard at the church steps following Sir Albert's
funeral. Rain fell once more, as if the heavens themselves mourned. 'He
really wanted Sir Larry to suffer,' she said as they watched the mourners
disperse. DI
Kard nodded. 'Jealousy consumes like no other poison. He couldn't bear to see
Sir Larry happy with love, legacy, and a life beyond the shadows that haunted
Albert.' 'And
yet, he cried in confession that day.' 'Even
the proudest lions mourn their downfall. He knew what he was about to do was
unforgivable.' DC
Dawson looked away, eyes moist. 'He had all the three Ws once. And he died with
none.' DI
Kard sighed, watching Sir Larry and Lady Edwina walking arm-in-arm toward their
waiting car. 'A man can have everything yet if he can't let go of envy, he'll
burn it all down just to warm his hands.' As
they turned to leave, DI Kard spotted a small, delicate package in his car.
Inside was Sir Albert's copy of Macbeth, with a note: ‘For
my oldest friend the only one I knew would solve my final puzzle. The three Ws
destroyed me. Don't let them destroy you too. Albert’ DI
Kard closed the book and watched the rain wash over Crowther Hall one last
time. In the end, the great house stood as it always had proud, imposing, and
utterly alone. © 2025 Darius Chinoy |
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