Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Dark Dancer (Grass Seed)

You serious?
You expect me to believe this?

I don't and I won't!
Im not falling for this!

You can say what you want,
but your word's will come back to haunt.

You make no sense,
Im to good to believe this!

Never mind those thoughts before.
I don't and I won't!

You want me back?
What happened to her?

You make no sense,
Im not falling this time!

I promised I wouldn't,
I know I shouldn't...

Great you got me confused!
Hope you were amused! 

© 2011 Dark Dancer (Grass Seed)


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I love it. you can feel the anger in it. I've been through a heartbreak like this. Very well done. I like the added humor too.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohh i like it it kinna made me laugh tho reminding me of all the stupid things in school we do to confuse you but still i get the emotion and love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


I would also be confused if this happened to me too. It's good that you could sort out all of the confusion and write this poem about the confusion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love how you put so much thought but you also but so much emotion... its nice that you show your true feeling !!! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Dark Dancer (Grass Seed)
Dark Dancer (Grass Seed)

Toronto, Ontario , Canada



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Im Jessica, I dance and i'm very artistic. Though I can be a sad depressed girl. I can be happy and funny and at times I can be sad emo girl. I'm fed up of boy's and they have been making me sad. I ha.. more..

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