Your Words are like a Loaded Gun.

More random ranting about the happenings in my life.

It seems so long ago, that you let me go.

Said it would be better if we were just friends.

But here you are again, is this real or pretend?

I thought when you said bye it was really the end?

How can you mess with my head like that?

I know it's weird for you, but tell me the truth.

Since we've been apart are you REALLY that sad?

You were the one to say goodbye, the one to make me cry.

Am I supposed to fall so hard, that I'll try again with you?

You're really making me hate you....

I hate you for making me be the bad one.

I hate you for making me break your heart.

I hate you for making me ruin all the fun.

I hate you for successfully tearing me apart.

I can't believe I'm the one who said "no."

It wouldn't have been that way three months ago.

You're making me feel so damn bad,

I feel myself becoming sad.....

Because maybe, we had a shot?

Probably not.

I've been waiting for you to say this,

All that's left is that "fairytale" kiss.

But I know you'll just hurt me all over again..

Was that "I love you" real? Did you mean it?

It was probably just a slip of the tongue...

A mistake, of course, you're still young.

Do I regret this? Do I want it to be this way?

Am I doing the wrong thing? Am I letting my heart have the say?

Either way,

I still hate you for making me feel this way.

Author's Note

The format/scheme is a little sketchy, I apologize. I was just havin' fun with it. :P

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

No worries about the format :) love your title though, it surprised me. The verses flowed, the words expressed a kind of 'I have no idea if I did right or wrong and I hate you for making me feel like this' frustration. There was a nice, dark-ish, deep feeling..........hmmm.....putting this in library right now.

[Eagle Cruagh]

You wee just having fun with it ?
I just went through the same identical
questions and answers and no answers
and it is not fun. What we lovers can never, ever
understand is ---- there are no answers, the well
just went dry.
---- John

[Rae]

Very nice piece. I wish I could collab with you, like write about the same topic and put our poems together. Just an idea, keep writing!

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This was fantastic! Ha ha you're allowed to have fun with it...no apologies necessary = b This piece is so sincere, and it shows strongly, and I love that! Your word flow is angry, but elegant. You have a very nice piece of writing here...keep up the great work!

Brittany

[Mr Alednac]

The format was just fine, I really liked this poem its so very deep. And the title really drew me in... good job. :)