A Poem by the-One-with-the-Darkness-inside

This is one of my favorite poems that i've written. I have you enjoy this.


I miss you so much

How do I survive without you?


My life is tipped upside down

When the controllers enter


My world is heated

Every time you let me enter your embrace


Your arms wrapped around my waist

Your body so close to me


Every gift you give me

Every time you say my name


Whisper your dreams in my ear

So many dreams


You and I


How good we could be

How bad we could get


Every single gift you give


Wither it’s the use of your creativity

Or your strength with words


You bless me


Every time we talk

Every time we see the other


Every time you look at me

The affection so strong in your eyes


Affection I’ve never seen or felt



How do you do that?

How do you know how to make me feel like this?

I wish you’d tell me your secret

Maybe then I’d be able to make you feel the same



I wish you were here with me

I miss you so much

You’re not around

I’m so alone here

Why can’t you take all the pain away?


You know you do

You stop my pain every time you smile

Every time you hug me

Every time you simply speak


You make my pain vanish

You take my breath away


You enter my dreams

You warp my thoughts


Whisper your dreams in my ear

Hold me close

Let me feel your touch against my arms


The warmth of your cheek against my forehead

Your arms wrapped around me so tight


My world is finally right side up

I can see the love in your eyes

I can feel your heat


Whisper your dreams in my ear

Take me away from here





© 2011 the-One-with-the-Darkness-inside

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Great poem :) good flow and imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago

To want that so badly can consume! This is an excellent poem love, great imagery....steady pace and flow and honest! The heart upon the screen, as such! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago

I'd say this is your best work yet. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

Beautiful write, I enjoyed the last two stanzas best. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

I thought this was precious with heart warming imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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This is beautiful. I love it so much.
I can feel this poem. It's... moving, to say the least.

Posted 13 Years Ago

NIce flow! Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago

VERY good write! It actually has the flow of a song, even ...

Posted 13 Years Ago

I really like this, i think we could all relateto thiss, its awesome love it:)

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Added on January 30, 2011
Last Updated on February 6, 2011




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