Whisper

Whisper

A Poem by the-One-with-the-Darkness-inside
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This is one of my favorite poems that i've written. I have you enjoy this.

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I miss you so much

How do I survive without you?

 

My life is tipped upside down

When the controllers enter

 

My world is heated

Every time you let me enter your embrace

 

Your arms wrapped around my waist

Your body so close to me

 

Every gift you give me

Every time you say my name

 

Whisper your dreams in my ear

So many dreams

 

You and I

 

How good we could be

How bad we could get

 

Every single gift you give

 

Wither it’s the use of your creativity

Or your strength with words

 

You bless me

 

Every time we talk

Every time we see the other

 

Every time you look at me

The affection so strong in your eyes

 

Affection I’ve never seen or felt

 

 

How do you do that?

How do you know how to make me feel like this?

I wish you’d tell me your secret

Maybe then I’d be able to make you feel the same

 

 

I wish you were here with me

I miss you so much

You’re not around

I’m so alone here

Why can’t you take all the pain away?

 

You know you do

You stop my pain every time you smile

Every time you hug me

Every time you simply speak

 

You make my pain vanish

You take my breath away

 

You enter my dreams

You warp my thoughts

 

Whisper your dreams in my ear

Hold me close

Let me feel your touch against my arms

 

The warmth of your cheek against my forehead

Your arms wrapped around me so tight

 

My world is finally right side up

I can see the love in your eyes

I can feel your heat

 

Whisper your dreams in my ear

Take me away from here

 

 

 

 

© 2011 the-One-with-the-Darkness-inside


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Great poem :) good flow and imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


To want that so badly can consume! This is an excellent poem love, great imagery....steady pace and flow and honest! The heart upon the screen, as such! xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'd say this is your best work yet. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful write, I enjoyed the last two stanzas best. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I thought this was precious with heart warming imagery.
Sweet!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Kes
This is beautiful. I love it so much.
I can feel this poem. It's... moving, to say the least.

Posted 10 Years Ago


NIce flow! Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


VERY good write! It actually has the flow of a song, even ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this, i think we could all relateto thiss, its awesome love it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 30, 2011
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