Thousands of Poems (second draft)

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I have ideas about 

what’s beyond the wall

I’m climbing

I’ve written hundreds of poems guessing,

hundreds more about progress

Hundreds more about failure when I lose footing,

dangling from the harness 

Hundreds of poems about you,

hypothetical you,

a friend, a life I’ve lived in pages

Maybe I’ll meet you one day

if I climb out of these daydreams,

waiting away ages

The past makes good mortar,

I’ve mixed many batches with hundreds of poems.

Laying brick,

back tracking

as far as the eye can see.

Hundreds of poems about real adventures from before.

Is there something you believe 

that I’m too skeptical too feel?

I’ve got a few hundred poems

about love being unimportant,

a few hundred more about feeling incomplete.

I have ideas about 

what’s beyond the wall 

I’m climbing;

a thousand poems I can write

about being divided

Reviews

[A.G.]

I love your way with words.. this poem was very nice and smooth. Great write. I look forward to reading more of your work (:

[NoPoetry]

I'm glad you like it, I wasn't sure about this one when i wrote it just last night, but it has grown on me