Something

Something

A Poem by Darkness Eternal

Something underneath my bed

Something lurking in my head

Something moving over there

Nothing but the empty air

 

© 2010 Darkness Eternal


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This has a nice rhythm to it. The only thing is that I don't get it. Like... What were you thinking? What's it about? I like the short poems but... Idk. I just think it needs something more to it. Otherwise it's a very nice poem. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Darkness Eternal
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Writing is an escape. It is the key to a new word, a new beginning. It is an art, as carefully toned as any other. I believe this strongly, for writing is my escape from the monotony of the everyday w.. more..

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