Treat Her Right

Treat Her Right

A Poem by Dark Tower
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A beautiful woman is found in the soul of the one you ignored.

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Treat Her Right


Tell her she’s special

Treat her right

Tell everything’s perfect

And when it goes wrong tell her it will be alright

Buy her flowers, because she deserves it

Hold tight

Keep her warm during the coldest nights

Stroke hair

Kiss her lips

Caress her neck

Treat her with respect

Give her lots of hugs

To show her your love

Bring hot coco in one of those I love you mugs

 

Feed her chocolate until she can’t see straight

Still hug and kiss her

Even she’s gaining weight

Don’t grab her body

Rather her hold her hand

She doesn’t want a boy friend

She wants a real man

Be there for her in the morning when she wakes

Don’t like the others

Be the guy who’s not afraid to bake

Cook her dinner

So she can lean back

Set the kettle on, so when she comes its whistling

Ask about her day

And when she tells you listen

 

The happiest sound, should be her sighs

Give her a foot rub, in a hot and foamy tub

And when you make love, it should be by looking her eyes.

 

Bongani Armstrong Mhlangu

© 2012 Dark Tower


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A great tribute paid by u to the
woman u love ........ a lesson for all the men out
there who are in love should treat their women like this
Enjoyed it throughout.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I aim to be this kind of man now and as I mature.
I want to give somebody special this kind of affection and love, but so often I find myself facing the dilemma of a relationship where the other half only takes and never gives back. It's a shame :/

Maybe one day. :)

Lovely piece!

~Miguel

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is an amazing piece. I believe in giving all that you can and believe in love. No more needs to be added to this one. My favourite one of all your poems.

Posted 11 Years Ago


When you love someone. You do what you must to make your number two happy. I like the good examples to make another content. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very sweet and very true, and she will definitely gain weight if you are always feeding her chocolate! I have only one critique, go back and read it slowly- there are many missing words. But wise words for men-this should be required reading when entering a relationship with a woman.

Posted 11 Years Ago


awwwwww so sweet .... every woman deserves to be treated like that ..but sadly no one does ...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark Tower

11 Years Ago

Thank you. And I treat women like that.
a very sweet poem, very romantic

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark Tower

11 Years Ago

Thanks Melissa
Woah then what would she do for him? Lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dark Tower

11 Years Ago

Not much it seems

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Durban, South Africa



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