Aveline

Aveline

A Poem by Dark Twain

 

           Aveline

 

you took a beating

now you spend your life giving it meaning

I reach for the truth

while the patterns keep on repeating

battered and bruised

I know the beauty in you

I saw the phoenix fire

and Oh how it flew

 

Aveline Aveline

the venom is seething

you've seen it all, now you're leaving

if you don't return, what is the meaning?

Tell me, Aveline.

 

 

 

 
 
 

© 2010 Dark Twain


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"I know the beauty in you
I saw the phoenix fire
and Oh how it flew'

{lines so sweetly sublime}

{the last verse seems so full
of a hopeless/questioning mood}

great poetry!!!

james;-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wildy abstract razor sharp beauty of a poetic~ the first two lines speak volumes about how deep the childhood barbs go and continue to dig deeper throughout a life span~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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