Far from me

Some things are so near but we can't see them. That makes them far away, far away from me.

A burdened heart
A searching soul
A disturbed mind
The words so kind
The mouth which speaks
The lies it leaks
are far from truth
are far from me

The pitiful life
The sharpest knife
The blade which cuts
The memories that lurk
The tears that fall
The wild which calls
The faint whispers
Emotions clustered
So far from what I dream
So far from what I see

Oh everything is so far from me

Author's Note

Hey there, Readers! I'm a writer who's 13 and needs to be improved! Criticism is welcomed.

Reviews

[Fahmida Mehreen]

I think at one point there was a stronger beat in my heart.

Amazing. :)

[Dark_Poet]

I'm so glad you like this poem and commented!! Thanks a lot!! :D

[OverEmotion]

amazing poem! i love this very well done

[Dark_Poet]

Thankyou so much *_* I'm so happy that you read and commented!! :D