Love Is Never Fair

You took me to the edge

Didn't try to save me

Instead you watched as I fell

And said your farewell

Who knew at the bottom was your heart?

I tried fixing it but it broke me

We knew it would never work

Who knew that I'd fall because of a smirk

You shouldn't have said those words

Lonely, desperate hearts surrender too easily

If only I'd met you first

Then this love wouldn't be cursed

Now we'll just be friends

Secretly in love

I will pretend It didn't hurt when I fell

And try to ignore this lonely hell

Author's Note

I decided it was time to write again...I'm sorry if this poem doesn't flow. Just haven't been able to practice much. Thanks for reading and for reviews:)

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Heart doesn't need any flow to reveal the secrets of life.. in words. You write it well with deep imagery. Every soul in this world's been betrayed by hearts, but it's true, it's healed up by love as well with time. Love's always unfair to people, but when one looks over its depth, then he may come to know that when he once fell down into love, it was the same love which makes even the whole world so fair. Very true and insightful words you've come up with.. through emotions. Well written.

[Serenityy]

Really enjoyed reading this.
I like how you are able to convey your emtions so well.

Keep it up!

[Zoomout]

you writing is so good , I love the way you describe your emotions and feelings , you make me smile and cry at the same time

[yvo miki]

wow the flow is there its a very emotional poem I love it

[Emily]

I love this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Simon Welsh]

I like it. You're becoming such a good writer.

[Dark Poet]

Thank you Elliott:)

[Luna Zerimar]

It's beautiful.

My, my, my. I missed you.

It flows. Don't worry.

What's important is that at least you tried to write. Well, try isn't the word because this piece came out amazing.

I haven't been writing, and I've basically given up!

Glad you're back!

[Dark Poet]

Thank you! This makes me want to write more. And please don't give up! The worst thing for a writer, is not writing.

[larryb]

I thought that this did flow pretty well, not a bad write at all :)

[genocide]

this is dark and lonely sounds like you were heart broken