Not Like You!

Not Like You!

A Poem by David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)
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On being different

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The path I’ve taken
The one I’ve trod
Is a path forsaken
By a vengeful God

The path I’ve chosen
Is drear and lonesome
Trees lean close in
Damp lies the sod

I’ve naught of humanity
I lack the needs
The cold,  the callousness
That humanity breeds

I walk alone, my path unknown
To a Fate both feared and odd
But it’s a path I’ve chosen
A path I’ve trod

My own way forsaken
…by an unforgiving God…

© 2013 David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)


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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
I like you! I'm just not like you.

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I like your rhyming scheme in thiss; I don't vary my own forms of verse enough.

The road less taken is the one you choose...or are you just marching to an indifferent drummer?

Posted 11 Years Ago


David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

11 Years Ago

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David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)
David O Whalen (O Haolin in Celtic)

Las Vegas, NV



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Born in Kentucky, teen years in Loveland Ohio, old in age, young in mind, I'm not human, I don't believe in religion, love. faith or trust, I do believe in: lil' kids, ol' dogs, leprechauns, and water.. more..

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