Crystals

Crystals

A Poem by David Plantinga

The crystals groan, whenever crushed

Under a melting tread.

Snow faithfully fulfilled its oath,

And did just what it said.


In recompense for stinging cold,

This mantle vowed to be

Finer than the finest of white sands

And never slippery.



© 2021 David Plantinga


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A snow poem quite different from any other I have read. Another visual piece of brevity. I enjoyed the personification.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on June 3, 2021
Last Updated on November 29, 2021
Tags: snow, white sand beaches, quatrain, ballad stanza, rhymed verse

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David Plantinga
David Plantinga

Pittsburgh, PA



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For shorter poems I'm experimenting with ballad and In Memoriam stanzas. more..

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