Waxwork

Waxwork

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

The Waxworks of Nathaniel Trask

Had an entrance that was grim,

Beneath a couple of arches

There were gargoyles, looking in.

He’d only featured murderers

In the past, or so he said,

But now he wanted to branch on out,

As long as the model was dead.

 

I asked if he wanted celebrities,

He said they were overdone,

‘I’ll leave celebs to Madam Tussaud’s,

She’s waxed them, every one,

I’d like to capture the spirit of youth

Before time takes its toll,

To reach inside, then draw it out…’

(He was talking about the soul).

 

Something about the way he spoke

Sent a shiver along my spine,

The soul is such an intangible thing

But I’d like to hang on to mine,

He said he’d have to be there at the death

With a cauldron of hot wax,

And pounce, to capture that final breath

Before the body relaxed.

 

‘She’d have to be sixteen years or so,

Or twenty years, at the top,

I’d like to capture that innocence

Before the woman shows up,

For life is such a corrupting force

That the signs show in the face,

The eyes reflect the depth of the soul

And the state of perfect grace.’

 

I’d always thought him eccentric, now

I thought there was evil too,

I knew that he’d stop at nothing, just

To do what he wanted to.

He started visiting local schools

Inviting each class for free,

To go and look at his Waxworks

While he waived the usual fee.

 

I didn’t visit for quite some time

I was forced to work away,

And hardly gave it another thought

‘Til he called me up that day,

He said, ‘I need you to come down here,

I’ve got myself in a fix,

I managed to capture the beauty, but

The soul is playing tricks!’

 

I called that night when a silver Moon

Was barely up in the sky,

Casting its ghostly shadows on

The gargoyles, up on high,

I gently tapped and he let me in,

The place was cloaked in gloom,

He led me silently down the stairs

Where he worked in a secret room.

 

In there, was stood on a marble plinth

The form of a naked girl,

‘I haven’t got round to clothe her yet,

She’s as sweet as a new-found pearl!’

I must admit that she took my breath

As a perfect work of art,

I said, ‘You’ve really outdone yourself,

Such beauty gladdens my heart!’

 

‘Now what did you say about the soul,

I can only see the form?’

‘I had it covered, it got away

When I tried to keep it warm!’

I looked up into the waxwork’s eyes

And I staggered back in fear,

‘My God, what’s running on down her cheek?

It looks like a human tear!’

 

‘The soul is still in the wax, I think,

I must have made a mistake!

That breath I thought was her last, was not,

I thought she wasn’t awake.’

And only then did the horror hit

As my mind began to whirl,

‘That isn’t simply a waxwork, it’s

A living, breathing girl!’

 

The eyes in the waxwork followed me

As I walked from side to side,

They seemed to say, ‘Will you rescue me?’

And I swear, I could have cried.

Nathaniel took a scalpel and

I thought he would cut her throat,

I grabbed his arm and I dragged him down

By the long tails of his coat!

 

‘You’ve got it wrong,’ Nathaniel cried

As I pinned him to the floor,

‘It’s not a girl, it’s a waxwork with

The soul that escaped before!’

I clawed away at the wax until

It fell, as an empty shell,

For that’s the truth about beauty…

Just skin deep, then it fades as well!

 

Nathaniel cried to see the mess

That I’d made of his work of art,

‘I’d managed to capture a spell,’ he said

And now, you’ve torn it apart!’

The eyes that I thought were real, lay seeping

Silicon over the floor,

I never go near a waxworks now,

Nathaniel broke my jaw!

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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Wickedly wonderful poem David!! ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'll enter madam tussauds with a much more open mind after reading this one..... or maybe I won't go there ever again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing story and fantastic characterization, i love the part of the soul - "The eyes reflect the depth of the soul And the state of perfect grace." Such truth and reality.
Brilliant writing again David, you are truly a master poet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH my goodness. That's a story with a definite chill. Brilliant as always

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just knew Nathaniel had entombed her in wax..but the ending was much stranger than that! 'You' were lucky to get away.. ;-)
~pat

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok that was disconcerting and eerie at its best. Gave me chills to read. Of course, wax museums are a bit out there any way, aren't they. They are just morticians who keep their customers.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Disturbing piece of work, what I like most. Great story.! :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminded me of the character from Perfume. Nathaniel is quite disturbing too. Wonderfully written as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enthralling piece...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Intriguing write, David.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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