For the Love of Mildred Pierce

For the Love of Mildred Pierce

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

He lay awake in his narrow bed

And opened his bedside drawer,

Then fumbled around until he’d found

The thing he was looking for,

A faded folder, covered in dust

It must have been there for years,

‘I want you to take this folder, son,

And give it to Mildred Pierce!’

 

His grandson blinked away a tear

And uttered a silent sigh,

Then dropped his gaze, he found it hard

To look in the old man’s eye,

He knew he wouldn’t be there for long

Though his steely brow was fierce,

He said, ‘Sure Gramps, I’ll pass it along

When I find your Mildred Pierce.’

 

‘You’ll find her back where I left her, when

The way of the world was wide,

Up on the banks of the Darling, she’ll

Be there on the Wentworth side,

She used to teach when the town was young

In a little timber school,

I should have stayed, but the girl had clung

And I guess I was just a fool.’

 

‘She looked so prim in her teacher dress

And her hair was up in a bun,

We used to walk by the river banks

When her teaching day was done,

Down in the shade of the eucalypts

I kissed her there one day,

With her hair let down on her shoulders

She said, ‘Please don’t go away.’’

 

‘I only stayed for the shearing, then

I followed the shearing tracks,

I had to keep on the move as long

As the wool grew on their backs,

We said goodbye at the junction where

The mighty rivers join,

I should have stayed for the love she gave

But my only love was coin.’

 

The old man, he was exhausted then,

Lay back, and then he sighed,

His grandson waited a moment, but

He saw that his gramps had died,

He took a look in the folder when

He settled in back at home,

And found a number of pages there

And each one was a poem.

 

One called ‘Sorry!’ and one called ‘Why?’

And one that he’d drowned in tears,

One that was just a stark lament

‘For the Love of Mildred Pierce’.

The boy had blushed at the poem meant

To eulogise her thighs,

While others sought for her tender lips

And the lovelight in her eyes.

 

He waited until the summer break

When the funeral was done,

Loaded the car and headed out

To where the rivers run,

He thought that she would be dead by this

It was just an exercise,

But when he had asked for Mildred Pierce

They had caught him by surprise.

 

‘She’s out on the banks of the Darling

You can’t miss her little shack,

She keeps herself to herself, prefers

To wander the outback.’

He stopped the car at her garden gate

And he called out by her door,

‘I’m looking for Mildred Pierce!’ Then heard

Her footsteps on the floor.

 

He half expected an ancient dame

With half a foot in the hearse,

But what he saw was a lovely girl

And still in her tender years,

‘They named me after my mother

Who was named for her mother too,

But Gran’s been gone for ever so long

So what did you want to do?’

 

They sat on her small verandah, and

He showed her the folder then,

‘My gramps wrote these for your grandmother,

Some time in the way back when.’

She slowly read through the pile of verse

And her eyes had filled with tears,

‘I’d heard all about this shearer from

My grandma, Mildred Pierce.’

 

‘He couldn’t have known they had a child,

My mother arrived in the spring,

And she was told who her father was

But they never heard a thing.

My Grannie died as a spinster, still

A teacher at the school.

How sad that he couldn’t reach her then

To say that his heart was full.’

 

They went to walk by the river where

Some fifty years before,

A teacher walked with a shearer for

A magic moment more,

They stopped, stood under the eucalypts

With them both reduced to tears,

And that was the moment he kissed her,

For the love of Mildred Pierce.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2013 David Lewis Paget


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I really enjoy your writing...Did you know there was a movie with the American actress, Joan Crawford...called Mildred Pierce? It was set in the 1940s...Yours is the kind of story that stays in ones mind....and the sweet success in your solving the sad lament of the grandfather not staying to be loved...given over to possible love between the grandchildren is perfect ...


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A beautiful but sad tale indeed. loved this one David.

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Bittersweet ballad...people don't know what it is they walk away from when they're young...regret comes later...

I understood that these two were cousins. A kiss doesn't have to be romantic or passionate to be loving...

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Congratulations another brilliant piece of work, you seem to be able to play with the subject matter and words with such effortless ease. Always a pleasure to read and 'what a story'

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OH David you know how much I love you and everything you write. This has got to be my favorite I think so far. A beautiful love story that transcends time and space. I felt like I was there when the grandfather died. Brilliant as always. One question, The kiss at the end are the two grandchildren or the memory of the kiss so many years ago.. The grands would be cousins right? I was pulled in and locked to every line from start to finish.. This one is going to the top of my favorites in the library.. xo

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The riveting story of Mildred and her pining lover, provide a stronger fodder for us than mere story. The enaction of a teaching element here is drawing and dynamic, because it pulls us into the circle of life so nicely; the idea of learning from a past mistake and living on through our children is present. It is religious, philosophical, and everything charming, but really just a diverting read! Simple but deep simultaneously. Very well done. I enjoyed this piece immensely.

And I must say that I am sorry that it has taken me so longer to wander back into the fold. After returning from Europe, I began college almost immediately, and had scarcely any time for 'my finer notes' in life's activities. Please forgive my long absence, but note that it will not be long continued.



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Congrats on this your 800th poem in life.May you go on to 1000 or more. This was a well told tale of longing. The interplay of the verses is spectacular,In that old world sense. Your command of language and use of verse is rivaled by none. For happiness we all must see has its own price. The best things in life seldom come by twice

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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