The Duke of Spur

The Duke of Spur

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

Rosalyn stood in the castle tower

And gazed out over the plain,

It wasn’t exactly a sumptuous bower

For the drapes were old, and stained,

The furniture had seen better times

In the days of the knights of old,

But the cracked and broken window panes

Had made the bower cold.

 

She’d shivered as she had got undressed

And donned a filmy gown,

She pined for the sight she hoped to see

As she stood there, looking down,

Three knights stood guard at the outer moat

Their armour was dull and black,

They couldn’t be seen on a moonless night

But were there to ward off attack.

 

Attack from the southern Baron’s men,

Attack from the western marsh,

They came to rescue fair Rosalyn

For her sentence had been harsh,

Confined for life in that wintry tower

For her love for the Duke of Spur,

Who’d not been seen since the winter green,

Nor asked what became of her.

 

The rain came down in a sudden squall

He shivered, and scratched his head,

What could he do with the Duke of Spur

If the man had turned up dead?

He pushed his seat away from the desk

And he rose, and stretched, and yawned,

The cursor blinked on the final line

As the moon beamed in through the storm.

 

How could he save fair Rosalyn,

That was the question here,

He opened the door of the old bar fridge

And knocked the head off a beer,

He sat again at the keyboard then

And stared and stared at the screen,

He didn’t know where to go from there

But found himself in a dream.

 

He woke in the damp and windswept tower

Where Rosalyn lay asleep,

He thought that he must be crazy, that

His mind made a giant leap,

He saw the screen in the corner where

He sat, as if in a trance,

But here on the other side of the screen

He was caught, by some mischance.

 

Rosalyn woke from her slumber then

And she held her arms out wide,

‘I wondered when you would join me in

This tale from the other side.

I’ve seen you sitting and watching me,

You watched as I got undressed,

And I know it’s only a story but

In truth, I wasn’t impressed.’

 

‘I must be asleep and dreaming,’

He replied, ‘but you can’t be real,

I haven’t finished the story yet

But in here I can see and feel,

And there I am on the other side,

I’m sat in front of the screen.’

‘If you don’t shut up and make love to me,’

She said, ‘then I’m going to scream!’

 

He spent an hour in a wilful daze,

She held him close in her arms,

He kissed her eyes and her silken thighs

Revealed much more of her charms,

And when they were finally done, she said

‘Will you rescue me, or not?’

He lay as dead as he scratched his head,

‘I think I’ve lost the plot!’

 

He woke as the sun came slowly up

Stiff and cold in his room,

The cursor was dim and blinking as

The only light in the gloom,

He typed that a coil of rope was hid

On the other side of a drape,

Thinking that she could use it then

To make a swift escape.

 

She saw the rope and she tied it firm

To the leg of the solid bed,

The thought he was going to rescue her

Was the only thought in his head,

She dropped the rope so the Duke of Spur

Could climb and clamber in,

But when he climbed to the window ledge

The Duke of Spur was him!

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Oh my, the poet reveals the possibility that everyone has a fantasy, and these characters are Alive! Great twist, a really enjoyable read. Looking forward to more of same! Chances are, tho, that in hours I could be entertained by an entirely different theme triggered by your incredible imagination.......Barbz

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This one is a perfect example of what a writer is capable of. Converging realities and fiction and then again. This one was quite amazing, all writers will hope such things to happen to them undoubtedly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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What a nice twist. Fair Roslyn was saved after all. But woudn't it have been even nicer if the Duke had been dead for years, and a skeleton climbed up that rope...?

Posted 9 Years Ago


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What fun! This was a surprise! Methinks you live a bit much in your writing. Not that any of us will object.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ha-ha! David. I love this one. You are a genius! The images and thoughts that pour out of your brain are wonderful to behold. Thank you for letting us read these beautiful, delightful creations. I love, love, love this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Those lines crossed in fantasy are so blurred one out to scrub them away, well done, good read.

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that's a fantastic tale David, I love the twists and turns and the ending is a gem of poetry and story telling combined, remarkably well done :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my, the poet reveals the possibility that everyone has a fantasy, and these characters are Alive! Great twist, a really enjoyable read. Looking forward to more of same! Chances are, tho, that in hours I could be entertained by an entirely different theme triggered by your incredible imagination.......Barbz

Posted 9 Years Ago


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From off of the computer screen a jump into the maidens bed. I have had strange dreams but none were as steamy as this one must have been. A cute thought out write. Kathie

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Wonderful little twist in the writer's world that made him part of the story. Question: what part does Eleanor play in this surreal experience?

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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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