The Stepfather

The Stepfather

A Poem by David Lewis Paget

Since ever he came to live at our house

We’d never felt safe or sure,

So late at night we’d turn out the light

And block up the bedroom door,

We’d slide a heavy old chest in place

That he never could push right in,

We knew, with just one look at his face,

The man was riddled with sin.

 

Our mother, bless her, was long divorced,

Our father was gone for good,

He never called, and we were appalled

That he never came when he should.

‘Why do you need that man in the house,’

I said, ‘You have me and Drew.’

But she would smile, ‘Well, it’s been a while,

And there’s things that you can’t do.’

 

We didn’t know what she meant back then

For we were too young to know,

How a woman’s won, or she bears a son,

Where a man and a woman go.

We only knew he was far too nice

When he first came into our home,

His creepy fingers, they felt like ice

So we wished he’d leave us alone.

 

He’d wander about the house by night,

We’d hear him mounting the stair,

And feigning sleep, not let out a peep

When we heard him breathe out there.

He’d come to a halt by our bedroom door

And stand and listen, we thought,

The tears in my brother’s eyes would glisten

In fear that we’d be caught.

 

His frightful stare gave a mighty scare

When he fixed on Drew and I,

Our mother said it was really sad

That he had just one good eye.

His other eye, it was made of glass

He had lost that one in the war,

It never closed, so we both supposed

That he slept, but still he saw.

 

Our house lay at the top of a hill

And a milk cart stood outside,

Its great cartwheels were covered in steel

And to hold it, it was tied.

One day we loosened the holding chain

As he came out into the street,

And watched the cart as it rolled on down,

Knocking him off his feet.

 

A wheel rolled slowly over his head

As he gave a deathly sigh,

His brains on the road were grey and red

And the pressure popped his eye.

It lay and stared at the two of us,

Was accusing us then, and still,

The memory sits and stays with us

For we’d never meant to kill.

 

Our mother wailed, and our mother mourned

And she kept his one glass eye,

She propped it up on the mantelpiece

‘So he’s with us still,’ she’d sigh.

Drew would shudder and I would shake

As it followed us round the room,

We both grew up with a complex that

We’ll never get over soon.

 

David Lewis Paget

© 2015 David Lewis Paget


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Oh, wow, what a delightfully wonderfully intriguing piece ... I would say funny, but my instincts tell me there is more truth than poetry to this story via poem ... I do enjoy reading your heart penned to page, and this piece makes me pause, to be thankful, in remembering my own step dad who raised me like I was his own son ... Treating me better than his son ... We were best friends right up until he died in 1992 ...Most excellently penned, and cleverly witty too ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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David: The visual is unreal, you really went all out with this one (that eye, still LOL)...The sad part of the poem, is the truth that you revealed. The fear that children go through, that still happens today. The theme is very good and hope more will read; It truly is quite a write for sore eyes; okay, seriously your poems flow like a river. Your imagery is always beautiful and just simply a delight. You're unique, and so talented. Thank you again; I always so joyful to see one of your requests. The Stepfather got what he deserved...great ending. Loved it. Dale

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a superb piece of nastiness and - written in faultless meter. You've somehow created a monster who reeks of reality, even that glass eye seems to stand/sit/lie as the presence of evil in society.

Whatever you post you hold the/this reader's attention to its content, and by the end of the reading, the way in which it's written is much admired. Thank you yet again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Theres so much that the young mind can't comprehend - replacing a much loved father - difference - war - their own long-term mental fragility - but they can know right from wrong. I got a bit partisan because I had a favourite uncle who did the thing with his glass eye - putting it on the top of the TV and saying he was watching us even when he was dozing and I loved him dearly.
The graphic details was 'DLP on full on Poe mode'.
A tale of the consequences of one's actions following us to the end.
Class write David

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Who was the worse, the kids or the step dad? You laid this tale out so well and I feared for a bad ending for the boys, but not his glass eye on the mantle piece. Complex, I guess so. Great tale as usual. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the story and consistent and unforced rhyme, nice rhythm, I found the last verse amusing with the eye on the mantel, a relief.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Evil... and brilliant! Cruel kids!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Evil here evil there, evil everywhere.....just reading it is was a harrowing experience...at least for me! Of course, taking my personal opinion out of the equation, it is brilliant in its rhyme and meter, and a real kick for those who enjoy the macabre and those dwelling on the gruesome. LOL, after reading this, I think I'll turn on the tube and watch a cartoon....although they can be a bit rough! Well, thanks for the diversity..I guess life experiences take us on many paths......and others just have vivid imaginations....Great work, once again, DLP......Looking forward to purchasing your next book...Barbz

Posted 8 Years Ago


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David Lewis Paget

Moonta, South Australia, Australia



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