I need a break

Baby I'm not broken
so do not try to fix me.
I'm just hoping
I can shake this feeling.
of being abandoned.
I just realized I have encountered
pain and torment.
I just want to be alone tonight
to be by myself.
You have drug me along
so far down this road
that I just need to crawl
into bed and sleep a little.
Can you give me that
or should I forget it
and play a little longer
with your twisted game?

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

wonderfully penned once again, first stanza and the last few lines're interlinked and well written, showed some depth of your writing what you wanted to say.
have this 96.8/100 :)

[The Nude Writer]

Your thought process is wonderful. You always seem to know exactly what to say :) I love the opening line.. sometimes you just need a hug and not a quick fix.