My Lovely Girl

poem thing i wrote during a boring class thinking of my baby girl :)

 

My lovely girl
Her being my world
I see her eyes
Up in the heaven
Skyes

My lovely girl
Her being so great
Hope to always
keep her each and
Everyday

My lovely girl
With her amazing voice
Blocking out everyone
and every
Noise

My lovely girl
With her innocent
Smile lights up
My way in the gloomiest
Day

My lovely girl
Her being my everything
I will not stall
Untill everyone see's she is my
All

My lovely girl
Her being so sweet
Not the best
Candy could
Compete

My lovely girl
With her cute self
Not getting tired
Of it or annoyed as
Well

My lovely girl
With her being the best
Only in your dreams you will prevail
Of her being there with you wearing that
Veil

Author's Note

i just did this to put a smile on her. there probably will be grammer puntuation probs w.e all comments welcome no prob here im not a pro :)

Reviews

[Ally]

beautiful! touching and sweet :) i'm sure your girl will appreciate this :D

[Niko Azazel]

this is cute and sweet. wish i could write stuff like this for my girl but my writing tends to run to the darker sides of stuff but she knows the my poem beautiful disaster is meant for her so... i envy you your ability to write this way. awesome work