Wait!

A poem all about people telling you to wait and the affects of not acting and waiting.

Don’t do that

You must wait until you’re older,

as long as you’re not old and fat.

Dont do this

wait until you have more money,

unless you will want to dismiss.

Don’t say such things you’ll cause a sweat

theres no rush,

however you might regret.

Don’t touch

you’ll have to wait,

unless you pass your sell by date.

What did you do that for

I didn’t want to wait anymore.

Reviews

[Jennifer Johnston]

Have you considered using punctuation or italics in your revision? It might clear up who is speaking to whom, which will drive the impact of what words are being spoken. Well done!

[Deanna]

Thanks so much, I'll look into adding some punctuation.