Closer to Bliss

About a girl

This is kinda new to me
These things I feel
Somethings stirring deep inside
That haven't been seen for awhile
Almost like a warm sunrise
Or a warm camp fire

But I see it your eyes
These feelings are returned
What I feel for you
Are feelings that are understood
So please take your time
Because I'll give you all of mine

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

I'm quite pissed. My last review had way more to it thank what it shows. I'll just say much less this time. "But I see it your eyes" I think you meant "But I see it IN your eyes"? Is that right? Well sorry this website sucks and isn't letting me post my original review.

[Bryce Simonds]

Bryan my good man! How art thou? This poem is good! I like it!

"But I see it your eyes"