Love Defined

LOVE DEFINED

 

Love is a great many things,

A man a women and wedding rings.

 

It’s a child that love made,

Reaching out to lend some aide.

 

Hugging someone who sheds a tear,

Qr dying for someone dear.

 

It’s all these .and so much more

A term you have probably heard before.

 

Love is unconditional patient and Kind,

Dying on a cross then to find,

 

Your prayers are for them they know not what they do.

Gods love is unconditional and He gives it to you.

 

8 / 12 / 2007

Reviews

[Stacy A. Foster]

This is very sweet and leaves the reader with a nice feeling of protection, almost angelic.

A term you have probably heard before.
Love is unconditional patient and Kind

True love is all of this. Sometimes the challenge is finding that true love. But when it is given unconditionally it is a treasure to hold to with everything you've got.

Wonderful!
Stacy :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is beautiful poem...truth it is Unconditional Love for all no matter what. Thank you to Valentine for sharing this with me. Lovely write indeed.
Light,
Siddartha

[Valentine]

Deb..this is a very beautiful write..It reminds me of that old song.."Who am I ...that a King would live and die for" God bless Valentine

[MLG]

Wonderfully written - all that you expressed is based on unconditional trust

[Yira Simone]

Debby this was very good. I liked the way you listed all the ways love can manifest itself in our lives and how we can learn and benefit from the greatest love of all. You did a wonderful job of writing this. Thank you for sending this my way.-Catrina

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a stunning way you have uncovered "real" love, defined through some very strong and striking metaphors. Debby you know where it at my S.I.S.. Every line has such strength and truth, so plain and pure in reality. ~ J

[Jenny Davis]

This is beautiful....I loved the graceful flow of it and the message was truly a lovely one. I liked how you ended it with "they know not what they do" a quote from Jesus on the cross...inspiring piece :)

[T. L. O'Neal]

Very inspiring and gives one hope. Nicely written. T

[Yvonne Heidt]

Oh Debby - I loved this. Beautifully written.

"Gods love is unconditional and He gives it to you."

(Thank God for that!)

Excellent.

[Akaila]

umm wheres da writing?
~akaila~