Acrossed This Crowded Room

A Real life adventure.

Across This Crowded Room

 

Across this crowded room

Bye chance our eyes did meet

The way my soul took flight

Put fair wings upon my feet.

The intensity of your stare

Made my heart start to flutter

Would you dance with me?

A simple nod no words did I utter.

Our bodies moved together

As if we had become as one

As the dance was ending, I felt lost,

Devastated. As if I lost my sun.

Still you are at my side

You ask if I would walk with you

Out into the garden we go

I needed a breath of fresh air too.

I had never felt such passion

The heat of so much need

As if you but ask

My heart and soul would bleed

Never had I longed to feel a mans kiss

I ached for his touch

To feel my hands upon my skin

I knew I had to have him I needed it so much

He took me in his arms the fire began to rage

Suddenly he pulled away

He whispered lets get out of here

Your sure you want to do thisI heard him say

Oh yes I want to go with you

As we made our way towards the door

We traveled a short distance

Ten minutes maybe a little more

Now alone together we undress each other slowly

Exploring each new part uncovered

With eyes and hands and lips

Each of us discovered

As my dress falls from my hips

The flames of desire burns out of control

As our bodies join, we become as one

Both of us realize for life we will stroll

Heart mind body and soul have promised an eternity

This is no fading flames of passionate ways,

As you hold Me close and breathe in my scent

We both know we will be here until our dying day.

As morning dawns on our passions spent.

 

 9-20-07

Reviews

[Cherie Paregrine Isis]

Very intent!So true about the lust for love and desire,plainly true that you write!quite and adventure or two!

[None]

Such passion and tenderness here. A love like this makes one throw all cares to the wind and dive right in. What a beautiful poem, it reads like a special story!

[Phil Sanders]

Beautifully sensual and delighfully tender .. a gorgeous mix .. words used so skilfully ....

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Debby this poem is so romantic .. sensual.. i like it and love the style.. i am also glad to see you have some writings..
Beautiful work..

Chloe
xoxo