Dreidel

Dreidel

A Poem by DecentlyOkayWriter
"

my world's only spinning like a rebel dreidel. . .

"
my world's only spinning
like a rebel dreidel
because of you, darling
sometimes, if you look through my curtain
you'll see that I'm anything but fine
i'm sitting in my room
listening to my favorite tune
wondering when the other shoe will drop
the other day your tone was cold, your tears hot
the smell of your perfume nearly made me flop
i couldn't care, whatever you want to say,
i'm too far gone, anyway
i think you might
be on the brink
with me
every
day

© 2024 DecentlyOkayWriter


Author's Note

DecentlyOkayWriter
. . .no idea what this is, so pardon my nonsense. Thanks for reading!

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Hey! it looks like a dreidel!

Posted 1 Month Ago


SECOND VERSE SAME AS THE FIRST!!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Love this. Made me emotional for no reason. KEEP WRITING I LOVE YOUR STUFF!!!!

Posted 1 Month Ago



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Added on April 17, 2024
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