Disadvantage

Disadvantage

A Poem by DecentlyOkayWriter
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may the world be in your favor

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may the world be in your favor
because, I think if it's not
you've got a pretty big disadvantage
now, i'm no longer your savior
if you're not careful you might find yourself with naught
a single person to help you recover from your damage

© 2024 DecentlyOkayWriter


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DecentlyOkayWriter
Thanks for reading ;P

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mou
'the world' implies that the addressee has a very slim chance of getting rescued. Some grudges are humming, still the speaker has care for someone who had done something that is not so good. This is how the poem speaks to me. I like the wording and flow!
- mou

Posted 4 Weeks Ago



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