Disadvantage

may the world be in your favor

because, I think if it's not

you've got a pretty big disadvantage

now, i'm no longer your savior

if you're not careful you might find yourself with naught

a single person to help you recover from your damage

Author's Note

Thanks for reading ;P

Reviews

[Rose]

I like this a lot. It says so much. I can feel the resentment of the narrator, and feel the frustration yet acceptance about the person they have dealt with having had self-destructing behaviors.

[mou]

'the world' implies that the addressee has a very slim chance of getting rescued. Some grudges are humming, still the speaker has care for someone who had done something that is not so good. This is how the poem speaks to me. I like the wording and flow!
- mou