Hidden

Hidden

A Poem by D S Rollins
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We hide so many things...

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Invisible? No.
Bottled up emotions; me.
I live in shadows.

© 2011 D S Rollins


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D S Rollins
Would like opinions on the content and imagery (if it's enough, more.. etc)

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It feels like the beginning of something rather than a complete poem. It's simple, to the point with great potential but I think it needs a little more to round it off. Maybe just one more line?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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D S Rollins
D S Rollins

London, United Kingdom



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I am a writer. My heart and soul are in the words I write down. I've had this issue where I can never express myself fully in words, I write to express what my mouth cannot. It's freedom. I l.. more..

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