Nightmares alive

Nightmares alive

A Poem by Deidara

Eerie sounds throughout the night
darkness falls there is no light
scary ghouls they bring the fright
struggle vainly as you might

Terror strikes me am I dreaming
hidden eyes now are they gleaming
my tears fall now are they streaming
this deadly night now has me screaming

Setting sun the darkness falls
scary shouts he surely calls
as I run down through the halls
he closes in my heart he walls

Running from the evil one
this deadly chase has just begun
my feet I feel they weigh a ton
the blood soaked axe and now its done

Blood soaked walls and blood soaked chair
give you quite the deathly scare
bloody smell in liquid air
Can you guess what happened there?

© 2013 Deidara


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Hello Deidara,

I can guess, but that's because It's a hobby of mine.
Love the rhyme scheme and that you stuck to it. Well done.

Always,

Matthew
A.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deidara

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I greatly appreciate the praise.

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Added on April 4, 2013
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