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A Poem by Deidara

The one who gets me through my day
keeps my darkest thoughts at bay
The goddess that always treats me fair
the moon that's always there

The stars that brighten up my darkest nights
The wind that carries me on soothing flights
The ground that goes on unchanging
The one who never does the blaming

The cleansing rain that washes away my troubles
filling my soul with your delicate bubbles
Drowns me in your deep compassion
you do move me to passion

The obscuring mist that hides my ugly heart 
of which I've tried to tear apart
hiding all but you and I 
oh my heart now gives a sigh

The sharp lightning that strikes away my fears
and electrocutes all my tears
with one shock, jump starts my soul
repairs the damage, makes me whole

The unrelenting storm that never ceases 
bringing about change and new releases
that keep me in constant motion
like the swaying of the ocean

The drifting cloud that never slows
keeps me afloat through all my lows
Always right there in the sky
never wanting to say goodbye

The shining sun, you never dim
and when my life feels oh so grim
you warm me with your tender care
Its almost more than I can bare

The endless sky high above
covering all of me with your love
holding me in perfect harmony
bringing to my ears pleasant euphony

The one to see the black stains on my heart
yet still you treasure it like fine art
and without you, who would I be
nothing more than the monster I see

© 2014 Deidara


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This is sweet and unique.
What makes it unique is the word choice and the colorfulness of the imagery that you've portrayed here. I don't see anything quite like this too often.
There was atleast one mistake that I saw, but other than that,
Well done! ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Deidara

10 Years Ago

Ah, thanks. That means a lot to me.
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

No problem. ^^

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Added on August 16, 2013
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